homeRomanceBittersweet MemoriesPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Bittersweet Memories

byLady Lay©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sack10/19/04

very well written!

Good description, plot, and delineation of characters. Interesting twist toward the end. Your writing is very clear and lacks the "forced" cleverness of other writers. Bravo!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Jeff81810/19/04

Touching

Very nice story..... well written.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/21/04

Not As Bitter As You Think

Great story! A great reminder to love the time we have and the people we really care about in our lives. We have such a short time and often forget to tell them often how much we care about them until they are gone! Then it is to late!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by hebert10006/24/13

sad but lovely

thank you well written. captured the sorrow and loss of one who has lost a love one in the service of our country. Marines, they watch over their own.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Bittersweet Memories  or
More submissions by Lady Lay.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel