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loved it
I loved this story. It's original and full of rich images that are easy to mentally picture and enjoy. A great short work of fiction!
DeD
Interesting
This was an interesting story and I didn't quite know what to make of it. It could use some editing, though.
Lady Lay your tale on me...
Wonderful story, HECK of a good tale, ballad, lore and or literary Art~ Good Luck and (*_*) Happy Halloween.
That was an easy "5".
I wish it was this easy to vote on all the entries. Short and extremely intriguing, even without direct sexual references. Hardly a stroke story, just clear, colorful, entertaining writing. Might I encourage you to try a more extended story next time??
Revenge
Revenge is a powerful emotion and your story was a nice example. I enjoyed reading it, but I would have been just as happy with a bit more. LOL
Good luck.
unusual
unusual tale. a good tale of retribution. I wonder why you quit writing?
BOO!!!!!!!!*****
Cute fun read!! Thanks for sharing.
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