All Comments on 'Making an Exhibition of Myself Ch. 01-04'

Simply wonderful. Please continue the story.

Why doesn't he object?

What a wonderful story, I do hope there is more to come as I would love to read more about the different characters who have appeared in the story so far and hope to meet some new ones.

The best submission story I've read in ages. Thanks for posting it for us.

I'm anxious to read more. I can't believe how exciting it is to put myself in Jennifer's place. As a married mom and wife of 25 years, I find this very intriguing to realize how good it's making me feel. Please keep it going.

Enough praise cannot be give

This was a fairly decent story until the peeing in the bowl nonsense. It went downhill after that because of confusion of the meanings between submission and slavery.

Story stands out thanks to emma_sub's great dialogue writing and excellent portrayal of her characters. Especially when it comes to the train of thought of Jennifer, her emotions and the knowledge of the influence on her life through the consequences of giving in to her latent urges.

Thank you for still writing.

Five stars in the blink of an eye ;)

A great story. I hope you continue with this.

what a wonderfull feel of submission, thank you for the details

, , , intense. 5* easy for sexual heat. Thank you.

the interior monologue of the submissive, and the character of the Mistress, are so very well built. such eroticism, all around.

could have done without the man, but that's my personal taste. great story overall. please keep writing!

Fabulous

This is a great piece of writing. It represents many sides of the D/S process in an intelligent and realistic way. A sequel may be written but it does not need it. I will now read more of your content.

Thank You

My husband and I agree that this is the sexiest story we've ever read. Hope more chapters are coming.

Great story! Love it. Please write more.

Please please please continue this!

Chapter 1 was perfect- would love to see the same story but from Jane's POV and what turns her on about the power dynamic

Mistress

Doesn't it feel so much better to have your husband involved. Andrew will see to it you are well cared for. I would like to have been there to see your surprise of serving others

Just fabulous. One of the very best

Super erotic and so nicely done. Having others watch is so wonderfully sexy.

Wow, what a submissive!…under the control of her mistress …and watching the husband using her.