Great job and build up. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here since the trip just started.
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Anonymous01/25/05
Very Erotic
I found this story very erotic and generated a lot of "fantasy" thoughts. I'd like to hear more about these two cousins as they carry on to other escapades with a little more of their personal involvement with each other. And then more of the same and different kinds of sex. I felt the story moved along just as it should for this kind of story. There was no need for a long lengthy introductory build-up. The writer handled this very well letting us know just enough background and then got on with it.
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Anonymous12/27/06
HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!!
Damn, that story was super hot! Got me very wet reading it! Can't wait to hear more!
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Anonymous04/12/08
MORE!!! :)
Fantastic story keep it up. what i want to know is where i can find a strip loint like that. all the ones near me suck. lol
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Anonymous05/05/08
What the?....
OK Hawt story but just one question...... Wheres the rest??
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Anonymous04/26/11
Detroit's Finest
It's funny you pick Detroit as your setting but say you're from Cleveland because right by the airport is a high class strip club called the flight club then right across the street is bogarts which is the dive I work at. (;
English
Awesome....
That wa simply awesome...please please carry it forward to sex.
Very good story...and such a cliff hanger OY!
Please keep writing
Fantastic story
Great job and build up. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here since the trip just started.
Very Erotic
I found this story very erotic and generated a lot of "fantasy" thoughts. I'd like to hear more about these two cousins as they carry on to other escapades with a little more of their personal involvement with each other. And then more of the same and different kinds of sex. I felt the story moved along just as it should for this kind of story. There was no need for a long lengthy introductory build-up. The writer handled this very well letting us know just enough background and then got on with it.
HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!!
Damn, that story was super hot! Got me very wet reading it! Can't wait to hear more!
MORE!!! :)
Fantastic story keep it up. what i want to know is where i can find a strip loint like that. all the ones near me suck. lol
What the?....
OK Hawt story but just one question...... Wheres the rest??
Detroit's Finest
It's funny you pick Detroit as your setting but say you're from Cleveland because right by the airport is a high class strip club called the flight club then right across the street is bogarts which is the dive I work at. (;
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