Please! More of this storyline. Well developed up front, but now I want to see where this is heading. Thanks!
Thank you for this story. I loved it. It is good reading a transformation story where there is something positive for both parties. The story is well written. Keep it coming sister.
Great to see a story of this type without humiliation or the guy being forced. Please continue!!
Love it... especially the lack of domination....next step would be to go 'all the way' with Danielle... Since he has an 8"er, how about putting in a sanitary pad to 'hide' his manhood and taking him out en femme.... I like the potential of both being fucked side by side by two men... can hardly wait for Ch. 2
Cherysse, this is such a wonderful start to a fantastic journey, it certainly is my Hearts Desire. It is so realistic there are no steps I can't equate with it happening to me and you just can't wait for the next installment.
A very well writen and thought out story. One of the most enjoyable things I have read in a very long time.
Please write more.
You not only look at the sex, you also visit the emotions. That's what makes for an incredible read!
Throughly entertaining. One of the best I've read on the web. You are to be commended for writing a very entertaining story. Do please continue. Sincerely, Tommie Bridges
I just wish my wife had been as understanding of my true feelings of wishing to be a woman.
So far ths is great.
This was one of my fantasies years ago,, I am enjoying this immensley
Great beginning - hope the rest is as good
Darkest desires discovered by his understanding wife, from Danny to Danielle, this is incredibly hot.
I hope this continues and I can see that there are more chapters, this first one is very good and I understand exactly as I am a crossdresser and when I make love to the wife while wearing a nightgown I have exceptional ejaculations. I will be reading the other chapters soon. firstname.lastname@example.org
just plain wonderful!!!..
..great writing & story!!.......
......i just love it!!! xo
This is going great, so far; I'm anxious to see who Danielle matures as!
so far this is great , lets keep it going. i like to dress as well
Oh my God is this good.
More. . .pretty please?
Oh I would may handsomley for a wife like you. Your understanding of what men want is second to none.
Show him/ her the.ropes baby
I love this story, please ensure he gets used like the dirty little whore he obviously is :)
I certainly enjoyed this first chapter and look forward to the remaining chapters.
Nice, very nice. So many things to talk about, where would, or should I begin? In the beginning, the only reason she married him was because she didn't want to lose him to another woman, wrong reason. Yes, she realized she loved him later. She told him she would fuck other guys after they got married, and she did. So much for her idea of marriage, or how much she loved him. Yes, she saw the hurt in his eyes, so?
How she came up with info, and put it into play was nicely done. She didn't tell him she was into his sites on the computer, and that's how she came up with all of what happened. Communication seems to be Zero, and that could be the fly in the ointment. I hope not. Is there a difference between pillow talk and real life, you bet. Ask any married woman.
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