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ah come on how can I be the first to comment on this! Intelligent and sexy. I like it!
So many poems
are either too subtle to be erotic or too vulgar. This walks the line between the two very well. Clever and well done.
Convict me of guilty pleasure: I loved this poem
This is a fun, compelling poem.... The Title intrigued, and I like the way it developed its allure, its suggestiveness, eliciting (or should it be illiciting?) in its last two stanzas my joyful appreciation of its wit and style.
Great poem!!!
I can't do poetry and so feel under-qualified attemping to review it but I loved this. It painted a picture in my mind and didn't scream loudly at me but beckoned softly, wow, I think I just managed to say how I felt about a poem I liked, YIPPEE!!!!
Fab!
Very sexy!
I need
...to get me a provocateur ;)
Very slick indeed.. well done sis ;-)
very elegant!
You turn a phrase well, particularly liked the last stanza. Neat little poem!
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