All Comments on 'The Halloween Parade Transformation'

Please continue this storyline. Very hot!!!

I wish it had been me getting fucked, Hope you have another good time!

Wish I could look as good as Jamie! xo

Lost me when you had Brent turn on his friend.

0 stars

You get full marks for the whole plot, the transformation, and the sex scenes at Brent's. Good writing, shared thoughts & feelings of your character (which I really like). I had a difficult time buying into the way Jamie went from fearing for his life with zip-tie rapist, to swooning romantic with Brent.

Thanks for the heads-up at the intro of this story. I'd like the warning better if it were put more forcefully (pun intended). Full on Non-Con with the zip-tie rapist was enough to categorize it N-C/R.

Thanks for the story.

I wish I was that lucky my first time was with a group of kids looking for money I did not have any and they decided they would fuck me once we were in school word got out I was a slut then I seemed to be fucking any guy that did not have a date

Sexy story