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High Priestess...
...I just converted!!!
There is much in this poem that I like. The image that will stay with me for a bit is this:
"Confess baby confess you want me there
and this tongue you feel in fantasy will
surprise you with its living hunger."
I cannot promise that I won't one day steal "living hunger".
You're right
I will tell you.
Whatever you want to hear.
Whenever you want to hear it.
Why make a mockery
of a religious practice that some of us believe to be sacred. Don't get me wrong I like your poem but struggle with the religion thing
mockery
what makes you think this had anything to do with religion?
curious. I did not even think of the reference.
okay I wanted to say something else :)
religion continued...
This just has me curious as to how many people get offended by content that is never intended, only interpreted. There are many uses for the word confession, I know of one religion who uses this in one way. When I think of confession, my mind does not go anywhere near church. It more or less goes to a courthouse, or in my every day life.. okay I confess, I ate the last cookie.
I think it is a good idea to speak to the person before you get offended.
If I want to mock religion, it will be much more clear than this. But I don't. Not today. I am too busy preparing Sunday's service. No lie.
OOPS! I think
I missed the point! Now I understand. Sorry about that. Thanks for clearing it up. I hope I did not offend you! I like the poem either way.
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Very sexy, cool, erotica... thanks. :)
For me....
this is like religion and acid bebop fused together... Quite the trip, great poem..
Not only beauty…
is in the eye of the beholder, I saw no religion just a woman asking her lover does he have fantasies like she does. Each to his/her own I suppose.
My best wishes
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Hot, hot, hot
I remember this poem as well. Your descriptions and imagery puts a reader there and makes them want to be the subject.
IF THERE IS A FALL TO AWAIT
hide all pride, lust and hate. TK U MLJ LV NV
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