All Comments on 'Wandering Bk. 06: Charlie'

by coaster2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

kinda sad it's over like that...poof.... would've liked to have been guessing a bit longer and have the story end in a dialogue between Lee and Beth at Beth's place , as pillow talk perhaps , but hey ; it's your story , you have the talent to create something out of nothing and us mere mortals can only sit down and hang on for the ride. Thanks.

Northpacific2017Northpacific2017over 6 years ago
Looking Forward to Bk7

Thank you, I tend to agree some what with previous post,it is your story, as a reader, I greatly have enjoyed each section, at a level far deeper than the sex, maybe because , I am searching and as a reader see parallels to real life.

North

ChuckEPooChuckEPooover 6 years ago
Fabulous series

Bravo! Absolutely wonderful series. I’m happy he chose Beth. Lee was an identifiable character. It was fun seeing him grow. My favorite series on Literotica.

Big 5

buckshot46buckshot46over 6 years ago
Loved This

Loved the entire series. So so good.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
An exciting ride

Is this the trail into the sunset?

I'm going to reread Beth to refresh my memory.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
if we had been objective

We would have known it was Beth.

But since we were all reading from an emotional perspective, we thought ant of his women could be the one.

Well done.

Now for the follow up story.

ukdukeukdukeover 6 years ago
A cliff hanger ending!!!

No fair! Will she won't she?? AHH!

Seriously though, I thoroughly enjoyable series.

Read them all as one continuous afternoon!

Made me realise he did in one summer what I spread over several years after my marriage ended. Still friendly with most of them.

Sadly I don't have one that I can call up.

Now if I could just find myself a tall redhead...!

Rhsc1Rhsc1over 6 years ago
Nice

Job...and you wrapped it up well. Great read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
bloody champy-onn

giday coaster2

loved the read.

i like the way you sectionalised the books.

the diversity of your characters

bloody neat

cheers

sad ofcoarse that there isnt more continuance...

a good sign of successful writing id say

onya "good onya"

flarebel2327flarebel2327almost 5 years ago
a better finish

like the story , but needs a follow up with Beth. coaster2 most all of your stories you leave the readers hanging

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good series, although it could really use one more chapter with Beth and his new life to really close it out. Thank you for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I echo the sentiments of the prior comment. 5 star series with a wish for a final chapter with Beth.

G

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