by EmmaKnocks
I don't think it's awful; I think the narrator sounds a bit young, and that's the only cringey part, otherwise the sexy scene was fine. Work on the plot more!
My penis became a hard rock reading ur story!!!! Aaaahhhh.....I'm horny, can I get ur number????
I am reading all this sitting in my office.. Fucking wet
Can't wait any longer to go back home and ride my pillow