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Debbie's Descent Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by gizzmo30110/27/04

good story

great story well written... but please don't make it one of the cheating wife wimp husband things

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by Ghost Bear10/27/04

Please...

comtinue, but use some originality instead of the usual wimp
husband,slut wife plot.

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by Anonymous10/28/04

Please Make This One unique

If she turns into a slutwife, then let her husband be a man and not a jacking-off wimpy cum sucking fuckhead. Let him be a real man, and throw the worthless motherfucker out with nothing but a hungry snatch.

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by Anonymous10/28/04

continue

continue the story, but make it a very hot love affair between the two of them

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by Anonymous10/28/04

toys & masturbation

great start
i hope you keep it gong with the toys

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by SteveBigg111/15/04

VOTE!

If you like the story, please say so! It's easy to vote, and all authors appreciate your feedback...

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by Anonymous09/27/08

Amazing

Great story!

I cant wait to see more!

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by Anonymous01/08/14

Good Start

Please continue your tale. Lead up to imagining Debbie doing the dildo while doing him.

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