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josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
Before i comment...

Vanalas am sorry for not understanding u..At the first place

am astudent too and i know how school keeps us busy

just not posting and not checking on us made us worried and i ended up....But am sori van,next tym i'l understand

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
This is the U.B regime,,hohoho!!!!

Oh God now am now scared of the story b'se Aid now has many many enemies

BUT the way these two ended up marrying was asuprise to me...how the hell can????For sure these guys will never love each other..The hatred is too much

haa,luis's family gives me chills they are damn strict..oh God i could even immagine my self in his situation

how did the stone????God am really on tension for sure am scared,,i loved the argument btn them in the palace..God Aid and luis can quarrel,the job seeking scene,how Aid left the house hoping he'll come back.Huu its funny how these two ended up marryin!!! oh poor luis he was stonned hahahaha

oh i got it.the magic priest did it..Yes,he's the only who can do it

DAMN,what's next???? i cant wait van

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

no way am gona give in easily van..S.F.L has the ultimate love in all the previous 3 melodies

so i challenge u,lets see how u do it..and oh i wont be easy

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

ya lovers-nick and adrian ar the most indefinate for sure to judge perfectly

the theme song is Look what u made me do-taylor swift

once again vanalas i missed u,i love u and am sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I need more

This story is amazing!

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

what do guys say about the judgement??To me it was mwaaaah

we have 4 enemies,granny,ruby,luis and hanna..Jesus am scared and on tension..this playboy wont be easy!!!

Aid has to be stronger than Adrian for sure

best writer ever[king himself].....i love u,post soon

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Loving the story ... hate Luis he needs some hits in life to make him real. fuck his beautiful face there is a human he is torturing!!! I love the verdict, marry them and let Aidan's strength change the prince.

Other than the king the royal family seem to have their heads up their own arses!!

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

vanalas, if u're nolonger interested in us reading ure stories tell us

than taking long hurting us,u dont wana post

heck school,we also study.U think we just sit????

TELL US,DONT FUCKING SHUT UP

vanalasvanalasover 6 years agoAuthor
apologies

so sorry guys for the delay. josravictor I am really sorry. I am not currently at school it's just that the story took longer than expected. sorry but currently I have posted three chapters for you guys. I'm currently working on my eighth chapter. one again sorry for the delay. hope you forgive me. love you guys a lot. don't be mad at me

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
its okay my king

atleast u've toked to us..Hope u're doing well

so when ar u posting???We miss u alot.please post soon

we love u lots but I LOVE U MOSTEST

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Atleast post one chapter today..am not commanding neither ordering but am requesting u

please today,atleast we shall b strong with that...But just taking long kill us

please

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

school 2moro,i wish to come back,wen u've posted,van

i love u

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
shocking

It's rocking and shocking. Loved it

BitchWhoMadBitchWhoMadover 5 years ago
Hahaha

Bruh really? Ok 😂

CasualnagaCasualnagaover 2 years ago

I'm going to take a wild guess and say that Aidan is the prophesied mate of Luis. This will be a spicy marriage.

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