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Revenge

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by Santacruzman10/18/17

Another hot one!

Hey Whiskey, you bring out the sex in sexy stories. Good one.

Always a fan,

Santacruzman

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by WhiskeyIsGood10/18/17

Thanks santacruzman

I can tell you're one of my biggest fans dude. I appreciate you. Much more to cum!

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by grylion10/18/17

great story, but.......

a most excellent story, hon, I LOVED it. you just need to forget about COMMAS. used too much and in all the wrong places. nothing wrong with the story, other than that. keep 'em cumming.

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by TLB198110/18/17

Hell hath no fury like a woman with a dick scorned . Asshole should've known that payback is a bitch.

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by Brian7010/19/17

Fun and hot

Great story, it was entertaining and fun to read. And the sex was so hot! xoxo

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by Overthefalls10/19/17

What revenge?

If Allison is a lesbian then she's happier being with his sister. Since his sister is obviously a lesbian. In that case, why would he care? A lesbian doesn't make for a good girlfriend (if you're a man). If he's mad, simply make copies of the picture, block his sister's face out and send it to everyone Allison knows, including her family. I wonder if she'll think her idea of revenge was a good one after that?

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by Saqwana110/19/17

I see.

While i get he was an asshole for cheating, there could have been reasons like maybe he wanted kids or something. That aside this could end up blowing up in allison and Carrie's faces if he just blacks them from his life, i doubt carrie would be happy never seeing or speaking to her twin brother again.

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That's . . . Fucked up ?!

yeah i can see why she wanted revenge but it shouldn't be with his sibling. that hurts a lot but don't you think that he would revenge also ? this could spiral into a vicious cycle between siblings it would be interesting to see his point of view and what will he do in all this .

anyway not a bad read.

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by BaddGrrl10/22/17

There are, too many,

commas, in the wrong, places.

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by run_away_char10/22/17

@ overthefalls
bi people exist

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by nutcase66610/25/17

Series

Loved the story would love for this to turn into a series

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by Derrieredoer10/27/17

LOVED IT

Really enjoyed it.

overthefalls..... what revenge, she fucked his twin sister, did you even read the story. Ok so he blocks out sisters face and sends picture to her friends and family, is this supposed to shame her for being transexual? He has been dating her for a few years and is engaged to her to marry isn't he just outing himself also since he has kept it in the closet himself by not telling his friends and family? Where does it say Allison is a lesbian? In the story she has always been with guys so at most this would make her bi-sexual.(try reading it next time)

d_great_knightmaire ...... the guy was a cheating douche, whats the difference of his sibling who turns out to also be the best friend or a pickup in a bar, Corey was screwing a co-worker an subordinate co-worker at that. (so you understand that means not only is he a cheating douche but also a sexual harassing cheating douche.)
As pointed out above, by him trying to revenge also he has to come out to his family and friends for being a cheating douche and closet homo which he obviously wants to avoid. (been dating her for a few years AND engaged to her to marry but not let them all know she is transexual)

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Two wrongs doesn't make it right !!!

@ Derrieredoer. . . .
just because He cheated on her doesn't make it ok to go and do the same thing (and with his twin sibling none the less). She wanted something that could hurt him and she got it . The real problem is, if the author continue the story in a semi realistic way
the girl will find someone else in her life leaving the brother and sister to deal with with the aftermath and trust me people can be very resentful to the point of wanting to destroy the lives of others.

I get it he's a douchebag for cheating on her , be she's no different to him by doing the same thing and his sister is an opportunist with no morals other words. . .a bitch
but hey it's just fictional porn right ^^ ?

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