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by Anonymous

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by erotic4luv10/24/04

lovely

very lovely

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by erotic4luv10/24/04

lovely

very lovely

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by LeBroz10/25/06

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A dream of longing
For the lost...

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by duddle14612/16/06

only you...

A girl pours out her love and longing for the man she desires. Beautiful and poignant rendering.

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by tazz31706/10/12

TO GRAB HOLD AND NOT LET GO

to grasp you there and haul you back. TK U MLJ LV NV

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