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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tail10/21/04

Endearing~

talents are bubbling over...great poems!

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by lostandfounder10/24/04

Not bad...

for an AABB poem. Gentle, sweet and you kept the rhythm nicely. A nice poem done well.

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