All Comments on 'A Sacrificial Lamb Ch. 01'

by SlutSalome

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good submission story

This is good stuff. Nice writing and very real sounding. Please write more soon and have the sub lady fucked good please.

SlutSalomeSlutSalomeover 19 years agoAuthor
There is more to come!

Not sure if I can respond to comments here, but shall try.

That is the first chapter of the story, the other parts are waiting to be approved. Ia m glad you liked it and hope you shall enjoy the rest of my efforts.

Kind regards

Slutsalome

Jay_LloydJay_Lloydover 19 years ago
EXCELLENT WRITING... more soon please

This is a great opening chapter to your novella. Dark, intense and captivating. The main characters also have such obvious room for delicious development. Bring on chapter 2 asap!

Another thing: I just don't trust that Henri!

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