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Unbelievably Hot!
Thank you for showing the erotic side of teachers. I am a teacher that has the hots for one of my student's father and I would love it it if made the moves on me that you described in your story. From now on I am wearing mini skirts and seductive clothes for parent-teacher conferences.
Hot Teacher
Wish I had a teacher like this. I would have studied alot harder I would have loved to met this teacher at a parent -teacher conference She is one hot teacher Walter really gave it to her pretty pussy and ass.
Work is needed...
A writer must show not tell. You have a really hot idea but you have yet to write a story. Instead of telling us she looked like this, he looked like that, show your reader through your characters.
Let the father see her and notice her hair, legs, breasts, etc. The same goes for what he looks like; let us see her reaction to him. Get into your characters' heads and let their thoughts guide you. You cheat your craft when you tell everything through exposition. Plus it would be soooo much hotter if there was a storyline (conflict)!
Worthless comments
Walterio,
You must really pay attention to tawnygirl33 because she has written a sum total of 0 (that's ZERO) stories here so whatever she says must really, really mean something to an author like you in the top 20 on Literotica.
Gosh, I sure wish she could impart some wisdom for me too, NOT, so I'll just stay anonymous.
This is an unusual story for Walterio
To Tawny girl....you really need to read some of this guy's work! This was very short for him and in a rare lapse, he did not develop his characters. This guy is an excellent writer, and this one story does not do him justice.
Loved it - could just picture the scene
and she obviously loved it when she wanted to meet him again elsewhere - also must have got a thrill out of it wondering if someone just might come in and see them at it. Short and too the point.
Just one problem.. the initial anal penetration
There were parts of the story that were exquisite.. her being on the ladder, unable to move really.. that was extremely hot and creative. But I have a huge problem with his cock entering her ass. I don't know if you've ever been fucked in the ass, but it is pain unlike anything else. That pain lasts a good 30 seconds at least. I don't care how much lube or how wet my pussy is, it hurts like hell. Unless you are regularly receiving something in your ass, it does not magically not hurt. There is no possible way that she would not notice til 9" were inside. But, another point you should know is that length doesn't matter much for the ass. There are only two sphincters, one on the outside and one about 1" inside. Once you're past those, it is much easier. Keep writing! Loved the story.
great story
I would love to fuck that teacher
What the fuck?
This story does not belong under this category. I didn't like it at all.
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