All Comments on 'Taking Laurie for My Own'

I assume it picks up in part 2? Pretty please?

Good opening. Don't let this die

Usually these cuckold stories are from the perspective of the cuck. Good on you for doing it differently, I liked this and was sorry it ended. Still, maybe it doesn't NEED a part two? I'll read it if there is though!

Great effort.

Enjoying this very much. I usually prefer stories from the cuckold's point of view. Or better yet, the woman's (though those seem kind of rare— usually written by a man posing). This story made me glad I opted for a change of pace. Please continue!

Really well written, I loved the pov. Please add to it. It's very hard to find good cockhold stories.

I don't usually enjoy cuck stories nor rimming but this piece of art was just very well written. I didn't feel it was erotic as much as it was enticing. The feelings and interactions of people sounded so natural. You should try writing something longer. Thank you for sharing your creation.

Great story I loved it please write the next part soon