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A Family Affair Ch. 07

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by Anonymous12/19/06

it needed more feelings and thoughts

Well, i've enjoyed most of your writing but this one is too factual, too technical and not enough build up of feelings: including doubts, lust, fear, etc. It was all too accepting when Helen and Karen got together. A little struggle and a little more lusting before the fucking would have turned it from sex to great sex and eroticism.

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by Anonymous01/09/10

Best yet!

Ignore the nonsense that the previous commentor wrote, THIS was SO hot! It seems as though Loraine will not stop until ALL of their town has had intercourse with her! Hooray! Keep writing this series: It is very arousing. And, as I said before, just IGNORE the other comment on this episode. That person does not seem to realize that this is FICTION. :)

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