by Armphid
. . . and I really like sex (otherwise, why would I even be on this site), but this was a bit too much. Sex after sex after sex. It was a bit tough to get into at the beginning - tooooooo wordy for me. I wish that there was more of a story there. I shouldn't complain. The writing was ok, and I appreciate your efforts.
An author must use a fine brushstroke when painting, not throw buckets on the easel.
This was perfect. I was looking for a story with a lot of hot sex after sex after sex. The more explicit sexual details the better. The more sex the better. This got me hot and horny. Now I want hubby but have to wait till later. dang. Keep up the good writing and hot heavy stories.
Nice of you to return after such a long hiatus, but honestly, I was hoping for a sequel for 'Chosen for Vudamali' or 'Giant-Size New Half'.
Do you plan to continue them in the near future?
I loved your previous Halloween offering and this one was just as good - I liked the twist ending especially.
Are you going to continue your other stories? I'd especially live more of the Chocolates for a Scorpion storyline!
Great story, great plot, and wonderful characters!! Stories like this need to be rewarded! Please keep writing!!