All Comments on 'Forced'

Great Story, please write more of the same.

please write more

Please don't stop NOW!!!

very very hot... written as only a woman who truly understands how to please can write.

After reading this on xnxx.com and finding out the person who posted it actually stole it from you, I decided to find the original and tell you I loved it. I love how real it is and how you put in the I-don't-want-to-get-pregnant detail that everyone leaves out.

Amazing detail, i could see it all happening fantastic piece of writing

Extremely well written. I can't emphasize that enough. There's so much crap in this category that isn't even non consent and the victim immediately loves what's happening.

Also really loved the detail which made it very easy for me to visualize everything. So often you get the build up of the sex and then you get "he fucked her really hard then left her there" and you're left saying WTF?

Keep going, can't wait to read more!!I

if these are the kinds of dreams she gets...she should officially become a regular rough gangbang whore and pain slut !! ;)

this story is nothing to do with sex its about abuse and is total and utter crap it sounds more like a lead up to murder than a sex act men beating up women is not a turn on just makes one want to put a bullet through their head says to be continued dont bother its utter shit and garbage not worth reading

still a load of shit

Exceptionally erotic. Suggestions: heavy BDSM. Pulling her hair and spanking her while riding her anus, piston-like, telling her all the filthy things he was going to do to her, e.g. making her suck him as he pisses in her mouth, lying on her face as he pounds his cock deep in her throat, thrusting his fingers in her ass then making her lick them, rimming him, as he sits on her face, making her thrust her tongue deep inside, ass-to-mouth, cum in her ass, then full on deep throat, and so on...