by Belegon
Can you imagine the wonderful greeting card this could be? And the possibilities of illustrated poetry...
If that cheek you wrote of didn't blush, then they didn't deserve this poem.
It could be tightened a little, but the images and emotion are strong and the ending is very good.
It's my kind of poem. Beautiful, quite apart from the sentiment.
romantic! I love the cadence and the style, and the touching sentiment behind it really warmed me. Beautifully done! Thank you. LJ