While I enjoyed this story on the surface, I am somewhat disappointed by its brevity and shallowness. I've read a number of your stories and have always enjoyed the fact that they were both long and in-depth. This one, however, is like a pale step-child in comparison to your other work.
I sincerely hope that this isn't the end for this story.
I was expecting a wonderful yarn and, instead, I got a tiny bit of belly lint.
This tale needed a more tender hand and some more development. I know, 2 years after this tale was written, my lament that you are enamoured by 10 inch cocks will fall on deaf ears. I always have been able to do well with a six incher and don't feel imtimated by your freaks of nature. There are very few, 2% or less, that top eight inches
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Anonymous04/01/09
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i didn't bother to read your story if you are so stupid as to put "TWIN SIBLINGS" in the tag line then there is no way the story can be any good if they are twins they have to be siblings so you don't need to say they are there is no way they could be any thing else it's like saying his female sister go back to school and learn or get a good editor
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Not bad
Great Idea, I t would of been nice for parents not to learn until later that son and daughter were there though. I liked the idea of the servents...
Not your standard fare...
While I enjoyed this story on the surface, I am somewhat disappointed by its brevity and shallowness. I've read a number of your stories and have always enjoyed the fact that they were both long and in-depth. This one, however, is like a pale step-child in comparison to your other work.
I sincerely hope that this isn't the end for this story.
I was expecting a wonderful yarn and, instead, I got a tiny bit of belly lint.
This is So So
This tale needed a more tender hand and some more development. I know, 2 years after this tale was written, my lament that you are enamoured by 10 inch cocks will fall on deaf ears. I always have been able to do well with a six incher and don't feel imtimated by your freaks of nature. There are very few, 2% or less, that top eight inches
why
i didn't bother to read your story if you are so stupid as to put "TWIN SIBLINGS" in the tag line then there is no way the story can be any good if they are twins they have to be siblings so you don't need to say they are there is no way they could be any thing else it's like saying his female sister go back to school and learn or get a good editor
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