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Fine Line Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/27/04

nice ...

Nice build up. Enjoyed the climax.

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by Anonymous10/28/04

hot

Great scenario. Can't wait to read more

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by Anonymous10/30/04

nice start

hope to see more soon

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by Just@Fan10/30/04

Interesting Beginings

I just finished reading your story and wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I hope you continue writing in the same styles you have so far. If so, I will continue to be a reader for quite some time. I eagerly await your next installment of either series, until then I remain..

-Just @ Fan

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by duddle14609/29/06

Angry Coupling!

Two people always at odds with each other find they are attracted to each other. A very interesting read as the Writer does a clever balancing act between angry and lust.

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