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A Boy In Babeland Ch. 13

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/27/04

YES GO ON WITH THE STORY

KIM BABY IS LEE AND SHE ISN'T THE ONLY ONE CARRYING HIS BABY.

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by mike_jerry10/27/04

Ofcourse!Go on

Defenetly you have to write lot of chapters.I love this story

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by MicD10/27/04

good as always

This story can be endless. I think ending with Kim's pregnancy is a bit too cliff hangish. You can't end it there.

Continue!!!

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by Anonymous10/27/04

Keep it up

Don't leave it there! It's going well so just keep on with it!

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by Anonymous10/28/04

Keep up the Good Work

This installment is as good as always. Keep mom involved in the play as well as the other sisters. Make April and Lee the primary characters but keep everyone involved. Do one more installment with just mom.

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by kestl10/28/04

You must continue with the story!

It is getting better and better, so PLEASE do not stop! I hope that in the next part mom gets pregnant!

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by Anonymous10/29/04

Do not dare to stop!

I love storys that include pregnancy, so continue your great work! My suggestion is that mom gets pregnant by accident and April has a wish to have a child with Lee. Keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous10/29/04

yew

make the all the women all say they are having babies

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by Anonymous10/30/04

Bravo, amazing saga

expand on the pregnant thing, hell if they all get knocked up, that wouldn't be a horrible thing. and in ur earlier stories u said something about how the sisters started to like Lee cause of something that happened around age 15. U've never expanded upon that point, just an idea.

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by Anonymous11/01/04

Amazeing

Nemasis, you are a sheer geinus in the art of erotic story writeing. I wish you would continue this story till the end of your life.

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by Phideaux3411/02/04

DON'T STOP NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOO GOOD TO QUIT

DON'T STOP NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOO GOOD TO QUIT. I AGREE WITH THE OTHER GUY, ALL OF THEM ARE PREGNANT, LEE AND APRIL MOVE BACK IN WITH THE REST OF THE FAMILY, SO THEY CAN ALL BE TOGETHER AS ONE VERY LOVING FAMILY. DON'T LOSE ANY CHARACTERS, BUT DON'T ADD ANY EITHER.

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by Anonymous11/06/04

PLEASE DONT STOP

YOU HAVE A TREMENDOUS GIFT. PLEASE DONT KEEP IT TO YOURSELF. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. PLEASE CONTINUE TO SHARE WITH THE WORLD. THANK YOU.

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by Anonymous11/09/04

Gets Better the more Times I read it

I realise that it gets harder to go on but please don't stop yet. I echo other comments "WE WANT MORE!!!'

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by Anonymous02/25/08

Orgy? No...

Lee pounding Kim was a nice finish, but that's it. The family orgy with all the female action was just...too lesbian, especially since only one sister was "bi" with April--not all of them. Sorry, but this one really seems non-sequitor.

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by Anonymous07/20/08

CAN YOU SAY "SAGA"

By far the best chapter so far. This could, indeed, be eroticas first saga. It doesn't have to end. Servicing 7 (count 'em 7) hot & horny women is just too much for one man (even if he is young & healthy). Does mom have any brothers? Did dad have any brothers? How about male cousins? They could all buy up the houses surrounding Lee and create their own "family circle". (Just another avenue to explore).

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by Anonymous06/06/10

hold on if april is saying that to the group then why did she say her name to

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by Anonymous01/11/11

This lesbian orgy fest was just out of place. It just made the story weird and corny.

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by Anonymous09/16/11

incest

wonderfuland written weell wud love to read more

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by SecretLovers09/21/11

Loved it

I've been reading erotic stories for some time now and I got tired of them being so held back and coy but this series has been one of the best iv read so far i love how you hold nothing back i hope to find more of your work soon

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by Anonymous01/14/12

best ever

Ive read all the chapters so far and its the best story ive ever read i like the whole family support thing usualy theres always one member that against it but this is different i love it hope u continue. thanks for a great read m8

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