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by Anonymous

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by ukduke10/23/17

Nice quicky!

Deserved a slightly longer treatment.
Not enough sexual detail to make it an erotic coupling and far too short to be a romance.
However, the style is light and the premise good.
Shows promise.

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by Anonymous10/23/17

Read it twice!

I read your story twice! Thank you for sharing it. Gave me great ideas and not just for fantasy. Going to go wild on my "carpet." Write more please.

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by WatcherRob10/24/17

A good story

Not a great story but a decent one. The end is cute, can you call erotica "cute"?

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by Anonymous10/24/17

New to this?

After reading this I saw your other story. You seem new to this. Really like your writing style- easy to visualize!! Maybe you can turn up the heat by giving a bit more of the action? (In my case, not needed but others like it.) 5 stars and keep writing!

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by Cookie799110/29/17

Cute!!

Nice start. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous10/29/17

Yes! I agree!!

Keep writing!

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by Anonymous11/07/17

Next?

What happens next? Keep going please.

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