All Comments on 'Pumpkin Patch'

Deserved a slightly longer treatment.

Not enough sexual detail to make it an erotic coupling and far too short to be a romance.

However, the style is light and the premise good.

Shows promise.

I read your story twice! Thank you for sharing it. Gave me great ideas and not just for fantasy. Going to go wild on my "carpet." Write more please.

Not a great story but a decent one. The end is cute, can you call erotica "cute"?

After reading this I saw your other story. You seem new to this. Really like your writing style- easy to visualize!! Maybe you can turn up the heat by giving a bit more of the action? (In my case, not needed but others like it.) 5 stars and keep writing!

Nice start. Keep writing.

Keep writing!

What happens next? Keep going please.