All Comments on 'Wolf At The Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
More

I would like to hear more about these 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
This was totally hot!

I'm hoping for more installments on this story. Awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fantastic!

Oh my God, sooo hot! Loved it. Write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
=D dang

that was so great! very realistically written. i loved the last sentences of the story, it made it 10 times better. =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot

Extremely sexy. Would like to see more.

Crystals_KittenCrystals_Kittenalmost 17 years ago
rawr!

wow that was too hot!

MisterDevilsMisterDevilsover 16 years ago
I have to say...

That was brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
well done

i must admit it was quite an interesting story. goes to show just how dangerious magick can be if not performed right or without following the basics. one is taught to review what your doing and /all/ of it's effects. i /almost/ feel bad for her. merry part...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Twisted

I like it. Good pacing and setup, nice flow and no redundancy...Ha, and people wonder why I don't call on outside forces in my magick...

musclecargirlmusclecargirlover 15 years ago
Great

Loved this piece of writing. You did great, it's really hot. :]

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 13 years ago
WOW WHAT A TWIST!

I was totally not expecting that :)

Though... in happenstance, it isn't truly a bad thing to have that as your master huh?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
HAHA

Great twist serves her right!!!!

avatar302avatar302about 12 years ago
decadently delicious

Awesome yarn, well presented!

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