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I do hope this story wins!
I do love a good romance, and this one is exquisite!
I know the pain of losing a dear love, and I just wish there'd been a Mariane Duquesne in my life. Too late now, but I can still dream about it.
Improbable, but you made it work...
This could have been awkward in the wrong hands....that just shows what a great writer you are! Good luck with the contest!
Sweet!
What a lovely Halloween treat!
Nicely Done
That was a well-done little tale with a nice twist. Good work.
Rumple
Sweet and romantic
This was a very sweet, very romantic story. I found myself also saying "God bless you, Marianne Duquesne." Although I write mostly pure smut (impure smut to some) I like a romantic story like this also.
Lovely
I enjoyed reading your story.
It is a lovely romantic tale.
Good luck.
fun
sexy and sweet and just the right flow to make for a great read. "jakk"
oh yeah
and another part would be great if you chose to write one."jakk"
Do continue with it if you can, please...
The title says it all.
I loved it.
John
Not very deep....
but very nice nevertheless - It would be nice to believe this could happen in real life.
A nice, mild and lovely story and very romantic. I just wished there would be more character development but just the thought that this could actually happen, makes for a nice. wishful story.
Thank you - keep them coming.
Nice
Thought it was cute and it even made me tear up a little bit. Short and sweet, tender.
I Believe This Was The Best Of The Stories ....
that I have read from Frederick. It has the tender romance and yet the sultry and exotic flare that makes his stories readable and lovable. And, I have a special Marianne as well which makes it all the better. Thanks.
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