All Comments on 'Graceful Deception'

maybe it's just me, but the part with her friends on page one really turned me off.

I agree..her one friend was a REAL BITCH. She showed no respect for her friend. Spilling water was a cheap trick.

Good way of showing her husband had been cheating on her. Hopefully this would be the start of the divorce. Husband was a real jackass.

Continuing their relationship will be difficult, but worth the problems.

I saw the title and recall reading a story along the same line some time ago. I thought this one would be similar to that one. It wasn't. This one was much better.

When u started reading I wasn’t expecting much. I happy to say that this is one fantastic story. A great build up and a solid finish. And I am so glad there wasn’t any talk about him getting her pregnant. You have real talent. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

Most stories have the mom unaware but I liked the twist with her knowing from the start. This one is worthy of a sequel. They need to really rub it in with the deadbeat husband!

Not a bunch of crude uncalled for remarks by readers. It was a fun, delightful, exciting excursion as the reality of love itself became the center of the story... I LOVE THIS WRITER and STORY.........

this should definitely have a part 2 them continuing maybe mom giving virgin ass to son

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love.

You should continue this story line

A bit wordy overall, but I loved this story. Solid characters, genuine emotions, decent description of sex. Well done.

We need another chapter for the culture.

it was a very good read. I would have liked the bedroom to come sooner but realize that you were building a story with a fitting climax. I hope you will provide us with continuations of this story. Once again nice job I enjoyed it very much.

err...No

You had a good build-up to the bedroom scene. I think this is worthy of another chapter.

Loved the buildup. Five stars. You need a second chapter for some longer sex scenes. Maybe turn the father into a cuckhold rather than kicking him out. The son is the man of the house now type of thing.

great story

The incest stories are obviously (almost always) fantasies. But in this case the fantasy seemed somewhat plausible due to the Halloween masks, and made even more plausible by the awful relationship between the husband and the wife. I can see how the wife would welcome attention from someone else, even from her son in this case when he is being so nice to her. I enjoyed the writing - it was smooth and flowed nicely. I will throw in my usual request to include more scenes of the son licking his mother's asshole. The thought of a man (me, in particular) licking a beautiful woman's asshole really turns me on, although I mostly watch porn of lesbians licking each others' assholes.

Thanks so much for this delightful Halloween treat! Here's wishing Grace and Ethan many decades of happiness together!

loved the rawness of the mom son fuck

would love to read more episodes

may be a little detailed description of the sex act

A very wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.

Bravo, bravo, bravo! Not only is this one of the best Halloween stories I've read, it's one of the best stories period! Fabulous work!

One of the best stories I have ever read.

Thank you for great story!

What a kick ass story! Great flow, development and kinky sex! Loved it and sure hope there is another chapter

I'm not the only one that feels like this was either copied from another story on here or it was slightly changed from it. Which I feel you should give credit to..

Overall great story

loved the long slow tease and the amazing payoff. also loved the realism, curvy, full bush, no porn star cock. well written.

chapter 2?

Hope you write a second part.

It’s nothing like anything I’ve read wonderful story the realism helped a lot more please.

This ha to have another chapter or 5.We all want to see how things move forward for them.

Wow I was blown away by this story! it really had a wonderful build up!

So many unresolved issues. So many possibilities.

Now that they are where they're at, will Ethan tell his mom/lover about the woman in the hallway and his dad?

Sorry, you blew it just a few Paras in: she had the key card in her pocket right next to her phone! That did it for me. Details are everything.

The title says it all. Great lead-in for a series

A great story told with emotion and caring. I would love to see where this leads. It touched the hopeful romantic in me, Thanks

Good buildup, good writing, and sexy! There is a part 2 coming with this I assume....

This is a great story. I hope more parts are in the works, keep up the good work. :)

From the typical mom/son stories. I personally felt whatever emotions and moods you were attempting to create. This is a good one and you are to be congratulated. CONGRATS!!!

the second time. I enjoyed it even more! Great story!

Another chapter please,get divorced, named veronica as the woman hes been having a affair with, they move to a new place afterwards together and live as a couple.

A very yummy story, I'm glad that I found it. Thank you!

i loved it just think your self lucky that you have tasted love,luck after your great mother

Good GOD!!!! That is such a hot story!!! I wanted to be that son!!!

Great story!

Please tell me there is more

Absolutely great story, I would love to see a second chapter.

5 stars, without a doubt. And thanks, rarmons.

Im a sucker for a good love story