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how dare you!!!
give up on hope and birds and color and all that wonderful stuff!! somehow this is sort of Poe-esque in its initial feeling, despondant, hopeless, I like the ending, very good :)
So glad.....
....you end on a hopeful note. Look up, there IS still time.
I hope you're feeling better now. :-)
PS a five.
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Enjoyed this somewhat cynical write with real life images and I like how you ended on positive note.
A Five From Me, Too
and like Tess, I'm glad you ended this hopefully. It's very observant and insightful--but stay away from the Chef Boyardee--it's full of preservatives. :D
Great ending :-)
If you’re unpopular- a loner.
Endless nights of solitaire- endless nights writing.
on the computer- damn those addicting things!
Smoking cigarettes- 2 packs a day.
Without care or concern of lung cancer- but but, I do.
But maybe a smoker’s cough- damn cough keeps me up.
Shoot me now!
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