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by jo_greeneyes11/01/06

Such delicate words

Hi Sienna,
What a beautiful story, "That little bit closer" was, very descrptive, made me feel as if I was involved all the way, you certainly portray passion in your writing, you undoubtably have talent to access, congratulations, I really got carried away, just loved it.
Jo_greeneyes
Jobeth. luv. xxx xxx xxx

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by fire_breeze01/21/11

Simply beautiful

I don't know why I have always loved this story, but I do. And then it hit me. It's so simply, so lyrically beautiful, such a haunting eroticism.

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