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Outstanding
This one really touch me...again your words are so powerful
Great poem with some minor problems-
Definitely and enjoyable read. I have read a lot today and came across a lot of poetry that seemed to be more of a story than REAL poetry. This was beautifully written but there were slight problems with the meter causing the flow to be a little rocky. It's more near the middle and ending.
Also, you may want to fix the extra spacing between the stanzas.
Never to hurt and only to help.
Thanks for the great read, Dana
very good
this is a very good poem. it's not like i write, but is very good for the style of poem you wrote.
Wonderful reading ..
A wonderful written poem with your words of tenderness.
It's an exceptional poem touching one's heart and emotions.
Touching
Absolutely touching. It is a wonderful poem that reaches the depths of one's heart.
wtg
loved it arto
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