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Thank You
An exquisitely heartfelt story. Beautifully written, with wonderful detail. Perhaps this is the only way peace will
ever arrive in the mideast, when two totally different cultures learn to listen & then respect each other. Bravo.
Absolutely fantastic!
Beautifully written. It took my breath away.
Tender
and passionate. A story of hope, love and passion. And one that can hopefully kindle a spark of the same in all who read it. Bravely and, as always, beautifully written. Thank you. Mat xx
Absolutely Exquisite
Truly one of the best pieces of writing I've had the pleasure of enjoying on this site. Your work has always set a very high standard and this story has raised the bar still further. Bravo!!
Oh, Colly!
Exquisite story. Absolutely LOVED this sentence:
"It became a race, not to get pleasure, but to give it, and in that selfless mode they found serendipity ...." ~Imp
Wonderful Read!
I enjoyed your story very much. You did a good job of bringing your characters to life and making them people we'd like to know more about! I look forward to reading more!
A wonderful depiction...
...of the power of human nature and deeper understanding. Powerful and vivid in its descriptions, brave and insightful in theme, this story really pulled me in and warmed my heart by the end. Very thorough and smooth, Red. You should be proud of it.
~lucky
Wonderful Colly
Wonderful Colly, absolutly wonderful. You brought two women on opposite sides of a battle and brought them together with a tenderness and caring that took my breath away.
~CD
Peace, indeed
You never cease to amaze me, beautiful
Another great little story
Just wish they were longer!
As Always....
Simply spellbinding as usual.
Wonderful!
What an incredibly wonderful story! I enjoyed it so very much. You have such a great talent, thank you for sharing it!!
Honey
a very special story
You are such a good writer. But this story is very very special. Thank You!
Great Suspense With Lesson
I love action stories with strong competent female characters and this was won of the best I've read. Great action and I thought the scene where Ablaa had Sarah captive was highly erotic and well written. Great exciting story with a great message everyone can learn from. Very well done!
Wonderful work
Taut, fast-paced, and yet lingering and delicious in all of the right places. This is a stirring blend of action, emotion, and passionate desire. Well done, Colly.
thankyou
thank you that is an amazing story itself without the action delivering a lesson many fail to learn, upon which they may seek what they feel is the only way out. i once thought there was no purpose in life for me, and the i met my teacher and somehow she managed to become my hero. She saved my life because i was at the point of hurting myself and wanting to die. But after talkin for some time she got it through my rough exterior that things can change if we want them to and there is always more than one choice
Absolutely
Amazing. Nothing more and nothing less. I love your stories Colleen!
Excellent and Enduring
Others have better written praise for this story. Suffice it to say, and based only on this story and "The Furies", your calling is as a writer/storyteller. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, the fortunate readers.
SoCalCynic
Incredible
The writing. The tale. Simply incredible.
Enchanting Story
Wonderful, wonderful, delicately balanced story. What a talent.
EXQUISITE
A poignant love story across the divide. I simply love the way the author describes the passion and love between these two woman " IT BECAME A RACE, NOT TO GET PLEASURE, BUT TO GIVE IT, AND IN THAT SELFLESS MODE, THEY FOUND SERENDIPITY "
*** LOVED IT ***
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