All Comments on 'Queen of Paradise Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Story!

Really enjoyed the series, and can hardly wait for the next episode!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
great story

waiting patiently for more

PaddlesPaddlesalmost 6 years ago

great story, i hope there is more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
please write more!

please please please finish this story!

LisaBrooksLisaBrooksover 5 years ago
Wow!

I said wow before! Sex was great and women do say size matters! I know one said she wouldn't have a cock less than 8"....Let's see what happens next! Hmmmm Phyllis may be old enough!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This could have been good, but him catching his wife with the predator was bullshit! This isn't a tranny or crossdresser, this is a guy who thought he was trying to win a contest, with his wife pushing him, and got carried away. Using the author's own setup, the victim would have torn all that shit off and beat the shit out of Mark, before packing for home and an annulment. It's well written, but doesn't take the characters own backgrounds into consideration when setting things up. I'm out! This should be a brb story.

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