by Clemstra
Excuse me, but like in your story, I demand tentacle sex. You have a loose plot and some descriptions of aliens. This was supposed to be an erotic story, PORN for god's sake, and what do you give us? Nothing worth creaming our pants about, that's for sure.
I loved it! I thought it was funny as hell! I would've definitely been in that crowd of women screaming for tentacle sex! :)