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by Maria239410/26/04

one of your best!!

slumber stirred by the smell of dry sawdust
and wood burned in the heat of sharp metal friction
drilled with rough hands.


you can take a person to heaven and beyond with your descriptions, excellent work Seattle, will add to my faves :)

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by flyguy6910/26/04

I smell smoke

rising off this poem! My senses fill with the smolder of dream-hot cotton and skin-to-skin friction. Very hot, Seattle!

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by 10/27/04

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In one word

hott

okay two words

verry hott ;)

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