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damn!!
the first part you portray is harsh enough, but I think you have defnintely captured the reality of so many peoples' working lives..I was shocked at the last part!! excellent job lostandfounder, you cynical poet you :)
Real
Reminds me of an urban legend, but told with much more symbolism and starkness. It also gives new meaning to the phrase "working stiffs". Sorry, had to had a bit of levity...Good job! (you can keep your work tag).
A fun poem
Has a harsh blue fluorescent glow to it-- excellent imagery, L&F!
Good use
of repetition
"Suckle on the bosom of a vending machine
Nurtured by chemicals additives and preservatives"
Here I would have thought about taking out "Chemicals", redundant, I think it would read better a little shorter.
Bad use...
of your own time
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