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after a long airplane night

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by Anonymous

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by DanaQt10/26/04

Very descriptive and..

EROTIC! I absolutely loved this!

It was so greatly detailed that I wanted to give a 5 just for that. But some of the grammer and punctuation needs to be worked on- just a tad.

Never to hurt and only to help.
Thanks for the sexy read, Dana

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by WickedEve10/26/04

since this turned me on

I won't make my usual tedious poetry suggestions. Yes, I see spots that need editing, but since it turned me on, I don't feel like discussing line breaks and such.

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by Lady Clarissa02/28/12

Captures perfectly....

.....the speed an intensity of a one off casual coupling.

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