Well written, I love the twist in the tale, perhaps a tad improbable but definitely enjoyable and sweet.
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Anonymous10/31/04
very hot
wow. definitely turned me on. that was such a sweet and naughty story. and it didn't hurt to have the hero be a charmingly sexy firefighter, just like my favorite fantasy! loved the goddess-worshipper & slave-master bit too. great job!
what a well thought out and sexysweet story loved the way it played out and the whole role playing is hot too look foward to reading more of your work in the future. "jakk"
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Anonymous10/31/04
loved it
i was the nerd in high school never got the cheerleader but did get a godess who i worship everyday.
Very romantic and sexy. You write well. One of the best stories I've read. Great, cute, romantic ending. I enjoyed it so much, please continue your writing.
Mr.G
You write with a nice tempo. The characters are well developed and likeable. Very enjoyable read, keep it up!!!
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Anonymous08/21/06
Words fail me
Unlike you, I do not have the vocabulary to express my appreciation for your craft. Your style gives me the impression that you do not work at writing but that it just bursts out of you like champagne out of a bottle; and like champagne, it is vintage, it tickles, it arouses the senses, and by the time you get to the end, it blows your mind.
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Anonymous05/14/10
What a superb reading.
One of the most memorable and enjoyable story I have ever read. Please more!!
What a great story. Your characters are so courageous and out there. I must read some more. Thank you for your creativity and craft.
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Anonymous07/22/15
Favourite!
This is my favourite story. It's beautiful. Thank you.
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Anonymous02/24/17
Really on point
You really distilled the essence of what I always wanted as a truly honest and completely open relationship to the absolute basics. God I wish I could find a woman like that. Almost once.
Exciting
very naughty and quite wonderful
Delightful
Very sweet. Every nerd or former nerd's fantasy.
Finally
The guy finally gets the girl. Awesome story!!
Wow
Wonderful!
Great story
Extremely well written.
Damn!
That was good!
Good characterizations and settings. Nice setup and the flashback worked well.
I really liked the chapter titles and how they drove the story.
Plus the sex was really hot.
Good job Ms. Street!
What a tender tender story
Well written, I love the twist in the tale, perhaps a tad improbable but definitely enjoyable and sweet.
very hot
wow. definitely turned me on. that was such a sweet and naughty story. and it didn't hurt to have the hero be a charmingly sexy firefighter, just like my favorite fantasy! loved the goddess-worshipper & slave-master bit too. great job!
Love it!!
Excellent!!
5,10 20.............................
what a well thought out and sexysweet story loved the way it played out and the whole role playing is hot too look foward to reading more of your work in the future. "jakk"
loved it
i was the nerd in high school never got the cheerleader but did get a godess who i worship everyday.
intelligent
well writen and intelligent
Lovely...again
Another delightful story Penny. Erotic, sweet and with a delicious hint of mischief. More please! Patti
Sexy and Sweet
This story is extremely well written, sexy, and sweet. The characters are well drawn. Keep up the great work!
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
GREAT READ!! Thanks for a great read!!
I loved it!!!
Great! I hope you continue to write and post.
Wish you were mine
Very romantic and sexy. You write well. One of the best stories I've read. Great, cute, romantic ending. I enjoyed it so much, please continue your writing.
Mr.G
I really enjoyed your story!!!!
You write with a nice tempo. The characters are well developed and likeable. Very enjoyable read, keep it up!!!
Words fail me
Unlike you, I do not have the vocabulary to express my appreciation for your craft. Your style gives me the impression that you do not work at writing but that it just bursts out of you like champagne out of a bottle; and like champagne, it is vintage, it tickles, it arouses the senses, and by the time you get to the end, it blows your mind.
What a superb reading.
One of the most memorable and enjoyable story I have ever read. Please more!!
Fantasticwork
Quite an amazing story. Should be said that I was a bit surprised to find the author to be a female based on how the story was written.
Once again wonderful work. Pray continue to do so.
Amazing
and absolutely wonderful. You're a great writer. Love your depth.
Goddess
What a great story. Your characters are so courageous and out there. I must read some more. Thank you for your creativity and craft.
Favourite!
This is my favourite story. It's beautiful. Thank you.
Really on point
You really distilled the essence of what I always wanted as a truly honest and completely open relationship to the absolute basics. God I wish I could find a woman like that. Almost once.
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