All Comments on 'Betty Finds My Story'

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Michelle JoMichelle Joover 19 years ago
Wonderful Story line "A story with-in a story" ...

Wonderful story .. Loved your idea of writing a story within your story ... Double HOT!!!

Please keep writing you have a special talent for it.

An Admire from Kansas,

Michelle Jo

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Two for the price of one

Twice the fun in one story,my vibe and I love this story.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Arousing work...

Excellent job!

RonanTheAccuserRonanTheAccuserover 13 years ago

God, the thought of someone I know finding my stories is both my biggest fantasy and my biggest fear, so this one gets 5 stars from me easily :o)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wow...

Is all I can say. Please write more. This is a hot fantasy of mine or very close to it ..I want a sexy it woman to make mr do things that I already fantasize about ;) of course I'd be wearing panties all along! Yumm. Do u know any women that could do this for me? Feel free to email me with ant suggestions..

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 6 years ago
fantastic !!!

This story is so hot it made me cum (into my empty coffee mug, and then I swallowed all of it). I too am a closet CD faggot cocksucking slut bitch -- and I would love to have 2 Mistresses and a gay friend to make out with and do 69. I would love my sexy busty secretary to find out my secret and treat me like Betty treated you in this story.

Please continue this story - it's so hot !!!

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 6 years ago
loved the twist in this story

It is very interesting to read a story on Literotica in which another story is being read. That is quite innovative of you. It really turned me on, especially when I read the original story. Please continue this story - I can't wait to find out what happens next with Betty (she becomes his real life Mistress).

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