HOT HOT HOT. Even better than the first one. This is so sweet. Great writing and steamy sex scenes. Keep this series going... PLEASE? Ok, now I need a cold shower.
This story is hot. I want to be Fay. Mmmm, good. I can't wait for the next one! Hurry. =)
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Anonymous06/10/06
This is so hot
The second chapter was so goooood. All I could do was imagine myself as being Fay. Please keep writing more
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Anonymous07/12/06
Incredible!!!
I loved this story...Fay is sooo lucky. i wanted to be her on that picnic table sooo bad...
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Anonymous02/04/08
Totally hot!
Damn I'm jealous, that is my biggest fantasy to have a hot black cop fuck me over and over..I told my hot black boyfriend about it, maybe someday he will fullfill that fantasy.Keep writing I really loved your stories.
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Anonymous05/26/10
Continue the story
You should finish the story. She should become pregnant with his child - More than once!
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Anonymous06/18/16
Waiting on chapter 3, 4,5, etc. Lol very good read!!! Yesss!!
H-O-T
HOT HOT HOT. Even better than the first one. This is so sweet. Great writing and steamy sex scenes. Keep this series going... PLEASE? Ok, now I need a cold shower.
- Dawn
keep it up by all means
GREAT,im always into ir fun cant wait 2 see what u have planned next.
HOT HOT HOT
Great job, can't wait to see where they go from here!
Sexy
I want Damion..in a bad way..keep writing!!
Mona
Damn
This story is hot. I want to be Fay. Mmmm, good. I can't wait for the next one! Hurry. =)
This is so hot
The second chapter was so goooood. All I could do was imagine myself as being Fay. Please keep writing more
Incredible!!!
I loved this story...Fay is sooo lucky. i wanted to be her on that picnic table sooo bad...
Totally hot!
Damn I'm jealous, that is my biggest fantasy to have a hot black cop fuck me over and over..I told my hot black boyfriend about it, maybe someday he will fullfill that fantasy.Keep writing I really loved your stories.
Continue the story
You should finish the story. She should become pregnant with his child - More than once!
Waiting on chapter 3, 4,5, etc. Lol very good read!!! Yesss!!
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