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Fine Line Ch. 02

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by duddle14609/29/06

Hot Chapter!

Guy is turned on by watching a girl running as sprinklers come on. Instead of running to get away she stands there enjoying the wetness. Vivid erotic images help this story.

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by Anonymous06/23/09

Exquisite

Thus far, two chapters in, it is a beautiful game of cat and mouse centered around a wantonly wonderful subject - that sometimes, our bodies know better than our minds what we really, truly want. An excellent contribution to the archives that I will gladly re-read over and over.

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