All Comments on 'Bruises'

Wonderfully dark and romantic. I loved it! Many thanks.

Wonderful story.

This was one of few unparralleled masterpieces to me. I'm so happy people like you exist, it makes life worthwhile you know.

You took your time, let the plot take its course and the reader enjoy the characters. Hope to read more like this from you.

You've become one of my favorite authors on this site the last year, always excited when I see a new story published. This might have blown the others away, I wish it was longer.

There isn't a single person on this planet that has ever taken a savory hit off a bong. Long, slow drafts happen every day but the only people taking a savory hit of anything are the hipsters smoking rose-flavored camel dung at seedy hookah bars.

Excellent. Deep characters in a compelling story.

Also, "savory" has a preexisting meaning unrelated to flavor, satisfying, that caused the term to be popularly applied later to its now more commonly used definition. Perhaps educate yourself a bit beyond a sixth grade vocabulary before condemning the word choices of other adults?

I am " time poor " and wouldn`t usually read a five page story but i was hooked to your amazing story . Congrats on a great read five stars for it .

Stories like this one don't appear in venues like this very often. I concur with all the other readers in professing my submission.

5🌟's

Amazing job!!! I really enjoyed the build up and character development!! Thank you for the great read!

Very nice read and wouldn't mind reading more about these two

Your story about Gwen and Evelyn was such a joy to read. A true love story, but with all the angst of young, developing love. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for your character development and the story of this deep love.

Second story of yours I have read. I am 100% committed to reading them all. Great mixture of romance and heat. Love what you do.

I loved this for the plot but also for the connections my brain made. At one point a moment made me think of Rebel Girl by Bikini Kill, then I was thinking of The Breakfast Club as they ran, followed by The Outsiders. Now one thing I loved was Gwen and Evelyn in my mind reminded me of characters from The Outsiders used similarly to their English project. Though I suppose you could think of any S.E. Hinton novel. Great story I will be sure to read more.

“Vice Inferno” chapter 1 was the first of your work for me, and as I commented on that story — so very impressive/captivating. Yes, flawed characters but each so fleshed out, so richly detailed coupled with a charged storyline. So, I am now reading your other work, and started here: Again, real, richly felt characters and a storyline that is page turning. Loved it, and now onto other pieces you’ve shared. Please continue to do so; you write/create so well. Thanks.

Bravo!!! Great story. This is an original take on a serious issue unlike the many rewashed stories on this site that deal with abuse in a relationship.

Getting old just shows the differences from the own youth For example a girls fight in such heavy mannerism was never happened ....... The good old times had bad times too, and unfortunately we just learn from mistakes or misbehave ...... Good luck for gwen and evy

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I came back to read this again after reading it for the first time months ago. I utterly adore this story and Gwen and Evelyn ❤️. I do hope you'd consider adding to their story, it's incredible.

Thank you!

Definitely 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

A good story, covering a horrendous issue!

Well developed characters and story line with a good ending!

Thank you