it did not have the storie lign of the other stories u have i have read by u put it was still fucking pashionate as them
Very hot!
My only pet peve about your story is your 'your' when you should be meaning it as 'you're'. Otheriwse your story was fun to read. InkyBinky
Wow, these two were burning and lusting right from the start! Loved how it started in the kitchen then moved to the sofa!
... one digs into the really old stuff and finds a pretty little gem...
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very nice
it did not have the storie lign of the other stories u have i have read by u put it was still fucking pashionate as them
Love it!
Very hot!
Pet peeve
My only pet peve about your story is your 'your' when you should be meaning it as 'you're'. Otheriwse your story was fun to read.
InkyBinky
Sexy & Hot
Wow, these two were burning and lusting right from the start! Loved how it started in the kitchen then moved to the sofa!
Sometimes ...
... one digs into the really old stuff and finds a pretty little gem...
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