All Comments on 'My Brother's Friend'

Please continue this story?

Maybe keep it a secret from the brother until the end and they have a movie night where Dana and Tyler play with each other under a blanket with Chris right there, but not knowing anything. Maybe Chris gets called away for something and then walks in on them when he comes back and that's how he finds out... or maybe he falls asleep...

I don't know, but please let there be a sequel?

You could easily make this into a multi chapter story if you wanted to. I would enjoy reading it if you did and I will also looking forward to reading more of your work

This was SO good! No cringe, no grammar errors, a build up, and then you cut right to the chase! PLUH-EASE continue writing beautiful works of erotic literature for us to read!