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Yess
Just keep em coming want to see how far Kathy will let him take her
FINALY!!!
Funny and sexy
Outstanding
Excellent story...Loved every second of it...Please continue.
Excellent !
I can't wait to see another installment and find out what will happen next! Keep up the good work and PLEASE keep writing.
Best Ever!!!
A great continuation of the previous story. Keep 'en coming, we have to know what happens when Susan joins in!!!
Please continue
I love this story but please don't leave us hanging, update soon. I am dying to know what will happen!
Awsome story
Hot, Hot, Hot Hot Hot... Please write more I cum back everyday hopeing to find out what happens with Cathy and her fun.
Give me another, sir!
Please keep writing...just like Cathy I've got a big dick in me and I need to cum!!!
Great Story
I loved it. Great story and it made me so horny!
WOOT
this was also Great!!!
i can't wait for ch. 6
Hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to see what you have in store for Susan or Penny. Might I suggest working a Sybian machine into the fun and games. Excellent story so far!!!
so gentle, so hot
That's one I intend to remember and reread. Who else writes anything like this? Wonderful. And very sexy.
Thanks a bunch.
Hot sexy babe
I was really getting turned on by this story. I can't wait for Chapter 6. I hope that it is just as exciting. I am all wet now from reading this.
what an awesome story
I loved this story, when is the next chapter arriving because i can't wait
Great Story Dave
Hi Dave
I hope you continue this story, I will be watching for it to appear as a new story.
Thanks Again
mikey6948
one of the best ever written!!!
This is such a hot, sexy, sensual story which still takes place within the confines of a loving and respectful relationship!! I am fairly new to literotica, and this story has gotten me the more stimulated than i thought i could ever get!! I'd like to wait for my husband to get home, but i don't think that i can... Please write more!!!
Amazing
please write a follow up it was amazing,
kind regards
Amazing Story
That was fantastic, I want to hear more, when is the next addition?
incredible
that made me cum so quickly
Damn good story
Too bad we never get to see the rest. I really wanted to read what they do with susan, the rub & hypnotizing her, but seeing as this was written at least 4 or 5 years ago, I dont have much hope of any more being uploaded.
--Yoz
omg
fucking giveing me good ideas :P
To greatness
I JUST LOVED HOW U COULD COME UP WITH DIFFERENT THINGS TO DO YOU SAY IT WAS TO BE MORE IT IS GOING ON SEVEN YEARS I THINK U CAN FINISH THE STORY
Awesome Story!
I loved reading this story and I hope to read more of it if you ever decide to continue it. Great ideas so far with so many other events pending.
Personally, I would have had the husband take Cathy's anal virginity instead of her using the dildo, but that is just my personal opinion. It was still great with the direction you took it.
What a great tease
Nice story. You've left it with so many possibilities to explore and maybe that is how you wanted it to be. I really enjoyed it. Joe
Excellent story, shame it ended so suddenly
you have a great imagination & write really well but both submissions ended poorly. Such a shame that you didn't explore the possibilities that you crafted so beautifully within the story. Hope one day you find the time to come back & make it at least a little more complete.
Open ended
Great story and it is good to see you have allowed room to expand and add more to it. Of course it is open ended - that is the only way to allow you to continue and I hope you do continue to add to the story with more chapters. Lot of possibilities are open here for exploration.
So SAD
So many ways to take this story. It's sad that our writer has been quiet for 9 years now. There are too many stories like this that get you going and then stop. I was hoping to hear how things went when he hypnotized his friends wife. Not to mention where things went with Susan and his wife. Any good writers out there who would like to pick things up where HYPNODAVE left off?
Hot! So Damned Hot!
I felt like I was the one who was hypnotized. At least I wished I were.
More Please
12 years on, you must be ready to post more, surely.
What a Shame!
It would have been so nice to see this completed. There was so much to work with and so much to do with the caricatures.
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