All Comments on 'Not So Nice to Meet You'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Interesting...

I really liked the way you showed both points of view. I found his struggle with himself to be an interesting addition. All in all, a very good tale!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very heavy SM, from both POV's

Well-written, but really mean SM. Story alterates nicely between S and M's P.O.V.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
That's What I love about "Home town boys"

Nice Chi-Town, makes me wish I had your address, though some criminals aren't so easily taken.....

P.S.

Fulton and Addison don't meet Sugar, I think you meant Fullerton and Addison. But you should really spend some time at the Twisted Spoke.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
excellent read

wow! good writing...I loved it..made ME wet!

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I'm a male,-middle aged, and from Chicago. I have been dominant, as most of my stories indicate. It has not happened often, but i do have some interesting bi experiences also.