by Snekguy
Really good. I can't believe im saying this on this site, but I think it needs more story and less sex! LOL!!! A sequel maybe??? Thank you.
This was a very well written story! The pacing was good, and the characters both interesting and likeable. I appreciated the buildup, not describing the monster until it was time. My first thought was “It’s gotta be a vampire!”, until Smokes initial greeting and the girls words gave it up...
Overall a fantastic read, and sequel or not I’ll be looking forwards to your next release!
Honestly, I wasn't sure if I'd read this story. After all, for all your marvelous variation in plot, the sex scenes are very repetitive (Please Note This). However, I'm glad I did. I didn't click with Goetic Justice, but I certainly did with this story.
Wasnt expecting a Lycanthrope story when I clicked on it, but damn glad I read it. 5 stars, hope to see more of these in the future
Make a visional on the erotic art so we see what she looks like in human form and wolf form.
That was crazy hot n awesome and a little scarry to... But i loved it... Best i have read in months
That was a really super and engaging story -- thanks :)
This was the first of your stories that I have read and I was very surprised. It was an original story concept, believable to the extent that it drew one into it and the sexual content actually added to the story, and was not over done or forced. Oh, and the 'scary' stuff was actually scary. I see that you have quite a collection of stories on Lit. I'll have to see what else strikes my fancy. Thanks and congrats!
PerryNormal (*****)
Talk about strange love, the old saying that there's someone for everyone may hold a grain of Truth.
Amazing story. I have read every single story of yours. Your writing story is getting better and better. You also have constant updates. You my friend are the true gems in this place. I salute to you.
Best thing i have read here in a while. Good story, good writing. Thanks for following grammar & spelling rules!
Beautiful.
Very good story. Had me hooked from the first page. Hope you will make this into a few stories
11/10. Incredible writing. Been looking for a lycan story exactly like this for awhile. Some of the hottest scenes I've read in a year. Keep writing!
I don't get why not all of your stories are in the hall of fame. they're awesome
I hope you continue this storyline with a few sequels and maybe even a prequel of Jessie’s story of becoming a werewolf
Amazingly well written! It's one of these stories where you read for the plot and I absolutely loved it! A sequel would make this story even better <3
I love The STORY IT'S About time Someone Did A WEREWOLF STORY WITH A HAPPY ENDING THERE THE BEST KIND.
I like the sex in your stories. I was hoping this one might be about a regular woman. A bit disappointed when she turned out to be a werewolf. Dont get me wrong i like your stuff but i dont have a thing for sex with aliens.
Also, 10/10, swell vocabulary and character design
Well that was some ruff action haha. Great story m8 r8 8/8 :))))
Come on:
1. She's as wild as the West Texas Wind
2. She runs off when the full moon rises
3. She's a worried about _his_ safety, but there's nothing out there that scares her
4. The dog goes ballistic
5. He hears a wolf howling (after it gets dark)
Now by now he should be able to do the math, and come out with Lycanthropy.
Clearly. Unless he's mentally deficient! I know _I_ was certainly thinking about Lycanthropy by #3 or maybe even #2
Other than that this was excellent. Sexy. Five stars no doubt
Love it like I love all your stories I’ve read. I wish there was more male human female werewolf stories.
This was a great story very good ending and kept me reading throughout the whole thing....
I don't usually read fantasy themes but I liked this a lot. Well written and very absorbing. More please ...
When I saw erotic horror in the tag I was afraid she kill him at the end but no this is SOMTHING I always wanted from a werewolf erotica it always the reverse witha. Girl and a werewolf but now and it sexy as fuck it too sexy to handle with a werewolf knowing him as nd wanting him to be hers got it sexy
While I love the pinwheel universe. I hope Snek continues on with his other amazing story settings as well. I love a good werewolf story, and this was one of the best.
That was one wild ride! Truly inspired writing and solid storytelling! Kudos to you!
Wow!
If I didn’t already support you on Patreon this story would get me to support you!
BurntRedstone is one of my favorite authors here and if he takes the time to give Kudo’s you know you have done a solid job.
I’d love to see this expanded somehow.
Keep up the great work, please.
MDG1969
Found this story by searching for 'biker girls', and I loved it! I write a little myself. I didn't expect this to be such a thoroughly entertaining read.
Excellent work and I hope to see more of such stories! I love nonhuman content.
Wow.. What a great story, and if such good authors as BurntRedstone comment positivity, who are we as mere mortals to argue !!??
Liked this better than any BurntRedstone stories. Still confused why these other commenters put BR on such a pedestal (is average at best). 5 Stars for an actual good and fun tale with human guy and werewolf girl. Don't see enough of those.
I enjoyed this story almost as much as Demons Gate. A talented writer here. HOWEVER your non-reptile sex scenes are awfully repetitive. The story is really good, it can stand just as well with less sex.
Another great story man, this has to be one of the best female werewolf stories I've read.
At least twice I believe you made reference to a size - once her thighs, and once her breasts... If I remember right...
Referred to her thighs as at least the size of an oil barrel... that's nearly 6 ft in circumference...
Referred to her breasts as like watermelons in socks but then said couldn't get arms around one...
Also, human women can draw blood while scratching during sex...
And you describe her as the werewolf as not as smart so you'd expect less in control... and yet he only gets scratches... I'd really expect gashes from her claws...
Also, just plain be interesting how he eventually explains the damage to the house...
Well written but OMG slaver, slaver, slaver. Overused that word.
Definitely wouldn't mind seeing more of these two in the future.
Brilliant! Fantastic! Romantic! Thrilling! Sexy!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Sometimes I'm too logical (practical?) when I read stories like this.
I find it hard to accept that Jessie never licked any of Matt's scratches - she wouldn't have to have bitten him.
That said, I'd be interested in seeing a sequel.
Just wondering if bite makes transformation then would drinking gallon of it saliva do the same? It would get in blood like that. Plus he was covered in “slaver” with cuts and scratches. Good story. Knew what she was first time in diner.
Are werewolves real?
Do we ACTUALLY know (if they were) how they are created ?
when we read a story about stuff like this then the Author creates the rules as to how werewolves are made - it requires a bite - maybe its the salvia, maybe its the intent, maybe its dying because of the bite(blood loss etc) who knows. Stop being so bloody picky about how he should have been changed and just enjoy the narrative
You should write another story where a man screws a werewolf girl while she is transforming.
Thank you for this story!
Could you maybe consider a 2nd part like you did with Worlds Appart or Razz The Farmer?
Unfortunately I can't leave comments on sneakguy.com. Your stories are helping me get through the restrictions of COVID-19.
Good story, but one minor nit: nobody who rides calls a motorcycle helmet a ‘crash’ helmet. It’s just a helmet. What would be better is if you mentioned the helmet style, in this case it sounded like a full-face.
May be a weird compliment, but I adore you for writing this story because it introduced me to the band Hammerbox!!! When I read the line about Hammerbox, I looked them up on a whim so I could listen to them like a soundtrack to your story. I'm in love. Thanks for all you do!!
Sorta guessed part way thru what was going to happen. Does not change a thing, this was a thoroughly good story, l enjoyed it a lot.
Scores 5/5 no trouble. Probably deserves more.
Great work SG.
Into my favourites it goes
Great story. Got to say I would be very hesitant about sticking my dick inside of something that can squeeze fingers enough to hurt them, lol. Guess we'll just have to imagine that Matt asked to be bitten at a later date so they could remain together and raise a litter of little wolfs or whatever.
Female werewolf on human guy stories are so rare unfortunately, especially where the human guy lives and isn’t turned. Add on the fact that this story was so sweet and romantic despite the the stereotypes of werewolf fiction. I love it. I’m a total sucker for romance. Stories like this make me jealous of fictional characters.
I’m jealous of Matt. Thank you so much for sharing such a heartwarming read.
Wow a wonderfully written story, as soon as I started reading I could visualise the characters and settings. Erotic with a dash romance wrapped in a touch of fantasy just my type of reading.
Wow. Your powers of description are... let us say your Kung Fu is strong. I was aroused and entertained throughout. I suspected a werewolf but I wasn't sure until Jessie told him to lock the doors. Nice tension and pacing, good characterization and a real romantic chemistry. Plus... Freaky scary and freaky hairy. All kinds of freaky.
Great read. Thank you!
Wonderfully written story. I'm interested to know how the anti-aging thing works tho, that wasn't discussed much
Good story, 4*, it was a TON of detail. Not just detail but minutiae. It is one thing to start with detail to set a scene or start a story but through the whole thing had me skimming parts. Something to be said with describing the framework or using broad strokes but let the reader fill in some detail as they read. There was so much that I couldn't keep track of it all and it would kick my head out of the story.
Reading this was pure, unadulterated pleasure. Honestly, I’m feeling a little freaky frisky right now.
Great story. Very well written and thought out. Different kind of erotic but not in a bad way.