Remembering Becky Ch. 09

Sad ending...but beautiful

Thank you for a very well written tale. Interesting twist with the other lover's name...I was once married to a "Gerry" and didn't see it coming.

I had a feeling

I had a feeling this was not going to have a happy ending, but then again life is like that a lot. Thank you for a wonderful ride. I'll read some of the other chapters again from time to time, but not this one, because I was feeling like I knew Becky too.

Thanks

Nice touch - depth - detail - words - painting the people, scenes and emotions - great story telling

Well Done - more please - You have an appreciative audience !!

Dude, this is literature!

An absolutely brilliant, touching, sad, happy, bittersweet ending to the most erotic, supercharged roller coaster ride of a story this reader has ever had the pleasure of reading!!!

Erotic, uplifting, sad, wonderful

David,
Please continue writing. My wife and I read every chapter together and at the end, both had tears. You know how to arouse and touch and move the emotions. We are looking forward to your next story and you have inspired us to start working on our own. THANK YOU.

beautiful

Read your Emily story and decided to look at some of your other work. What a wonderful piece of work this series was as well!

Wow

I am overwhelmed by the impact that this story had on me. I got chocked up reading it and that hasn’t happened to me in a long time. Thank you very much for writing it and sharing it with us.

Super, super great!

FAN - tasticly good!!!

redcar

It hurt. A lot.

Reading this final chapter just hurt a great deal. Reminds me of all the important peoplein my life whoare forever gone.

Wow - I just finished reading your Becky series. I sought out more of your stories after reading Frost Heaves and Norman the Cat. Thank you for all of these stories. I have to say that I almost didn't read the last chapter of Remembering Becky. I guess you had made it clear that she and Dave wouldn't end up together and I was afraid she would dump him for Jerry. I was horrified, sad but almost relieved when I read it wasn't a dump - remembering how destroyed Dave was by his divorce. I was stumped right up until the time Dave realized who Jerry was. I am so sorry for Dave's pain, I'm assuming your pain. I am anxious to read more of your work. Again, thank you.

This seems like the real story behind Frost heaves

sad

great story but sad ending look forward to reading more like it thanks