All Comments on 'Naked Revenge'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Liked the twist

Well written story about revenge that may or may not have backfired.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good tale of maybe revenge?

But I couldn't get a picture in my mind of the "frame"? So the story lost a little. And if she knew Jane was a submissive wouldn't she have had a different plan? And if she really caned her that many times, she surely would have broken the skin on her arse. So a few little details would have improved the story. Keep at it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Oh God

That was stupid.

GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Hey,It Still Had to Hurt!

The cane to Jane's ass 12 times is at least going to keep her from sitting for several days! Plus the final,"Fuck you,cunt!" had to bring some satisfaction.

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